Random Words
Castles, Build, Wonder, Health, Free, Future, Existence, Youth, Ignored, Culture, Value, Dreams, Pain, Love, Cautiously, Soul, Hope, Mind, Importance, Bright
My Soul Dreams Cautiously
Of Love overcoming Ignored Pain
Where Health will prevail
And Culture will change
The Future will become Bright with Hope
And the Wonder of my Youth
Will Build Castles in the sky
And my Mind will be Free to see the Value
Of the Importance of my Existence.
Wow! I love this, Louise.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sarah: That was our first exercise last Thursday :o) Mornings are great for me for writing....... which is why I loved the morning session so much. By afternoon, I was a bit hazy lol. thank you for your support :o)
ReplyDeleteNicely done, I used to write poetry but I never followed any proper form, but rather wrote as a way to release emotion.
ReplyDeleteThank you Zamipoo (that is N's nickname for you right? lol). I have just redisccovered poetry and am starting to fall in love with it. In 'free verse' there are no rules or restrictions - no 'proper form'. And I do agree with you - it releases emotions - I would love to read some of your poetry :o)
ReplyDeleteLove your poetry, Louise... I am so glad that you were able to go to this workshop. People often think poetry has to be difficult or that they won't understand or cannot do it... these are all blocks standing in the way of learning to express ourselves using this beautiful format. So glad that you have embraced the poet inside of you. Love these. You are very talented.
ReplyDeleteYou can find some in my Facebook notes from a few years ago if you look on my profile.
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